主題與四件作品 Theme & 4 Pieces
你係咪：主題一揀就死，太闊變「主題海報」，太窄寫死；四件之間冇因果，十秒講唔清主線？
Stuck: theme too broad becomes a "poster"; too narrow hits a dead end; four pieces with no cause-and-effect; can't explain your line in 10 seconds?
我哋幫你收窄到一條可研究嘅問題（「我想用＿＿媒介，處理＿＿場景中嘅＿＿矛盾」），再排四件嘅因果節奏——每件只改一兩個變項，由散點變主線。要你親身觀察、速寫、現場記錄，唔好用網圖交差。（SBA 作品 30%、四件、至少一件藝術作品）
We narrow you to a researchable question, then sequence four pieces with cause-and-effect—each changing only one or two variables, turning scatter into a line. First-hand observation only, no web images. (SBA artworks 30%, four pieces, at least one artwork)
研究工作簿 Research Workbook
你係咪：工作簿貼滿相但「唔成鏈」，過程相唔夠，反思淨係寫「好開心學到好多」，媒介試驗像玩遊戲冇結論？
Stuck: workbook full of images but no chain; not enough process photos; reflection only "happy I learned a lot"; media trials like play with no conclusion?
我哋幫你建立「目的→做法→結果→判斷」證據鏈，每次試驗只改一個變數、寫淘汰理由；教你留過程相；反思改寫成「我原本以為…→試驗後發現…→因此我改為…」。評卷要見推進，唔係材料堆疊。（工作簿 20%，moderation 抽樣最多 24 頁）
We build "purpose then method then result then judgment" chains, one variable per trial with elimination reasons; keep process photos; rewrite reflection as "I assumed then found then so I changed to". Markers want progression, not stacks. (Workbook 20%, moderation samples up to 24 pages)
藝術評賞寫作 Art Criticism Writing
你係咪：畫功好但評賞拉低，停喺「好靚好有感覺」，唔識用術語，45 分鐘限時寫唔完？
Stuck: strong painting but weak criticism, stuck at "it's pretty", can't use terminology, can't finish in 45 minutes?
我哋幫你練「描述→形式分析→意義詮釋→價值判斷」四步，重點操形式分析——「元素→效果→主題」句式，唔好只列色彩線條名。限時練習，教你諗唔到就直接跳下一句，唔好死諗。畫功好唔夠，要寫到評卷見到你睇得明。（甲部 10%）
We drill the four-step "description, formal analysis, interpretation, judgment", focusing on formal analysis—"element, effect, theme" sentences, not just naming colours and lines. Timed practice; skip what you can't think of. Good painting isn't enough; you must write so markers see you understand. (Part A 10%)
公開試 4 小時 4-Hour Public Exam
你係咪：4 小時唔夠用，起草稿用咗 30 分鐘，唔知評卷要咩，甚至帶錯材料入場？
Stuck: 4 hours not enough, 30 minutes on draft, don't know what markers want, maybe even brought wrong materials?
我哋幫你練限時拆題節奏、構圖焦點策略，把 rubric「abundant exploration」「informed personal view」翻譯成人話。仲會同你過可帶物料清單——油畫顏料係慢乾，公開試禁用，唔好到考場先知。（乙部 40%、約 3 小時 15 分）
We drill timed breakdown, compositional focus strategy, and translate rubric jargon ("abundant exploration", "informed personal view") into plain words. We also go over the allowed materials list—oil paint is slow-drying and banned in the exam; don't find out at the venue. (Part B 40%, ~3h15)
制度同情緒 The System & Your Sanity
你係咪：覺得要「推銷」自己作品，老師唔理解你意念，驚抄襲中伏，覆核又難，靠猜老師喜好？
Stuck: feeling like a "salesman" pushing your work, teacher doesn't get your concept, fear plagiarism traps, appeals rarely work, guessing teacher preferences?
我哋唔教你討好老師——我哋幫你把意念翻譯成評卷聽得明嘅證據語言，令你嘅判斷自己企得住。原創界線我哋幫你把關（參考要寫作者作品名年份來源，重點係學方法唔係抄風格）。rubric 有等級描述，我哋教你對照，唔靠猜。對分數不滿可申請覆核但成功機率偏低，所以事前做對更關鍵。
We don't teach you to please teachers—we help you translate your concept into evidence language markers read, so your judgment stands on its own. We guard originality (cite artist, title, year, source; learn methods, not styles). Rubrics have level descriptors; we teach you to match them, not guess. Appeals rarely succeed, so getting it right upfront matters more.
